To improve my initial storyboard draft, I discussed with my media teacher the good points and the points in which I can make better.
To begin, I was told that the issues and themes were very clear from just looking at the storyboard, and that there was a wide variety of shot sizes used.
The first point that I could improve on was the amount of vanity titles that I included, as I put 2 in the storyboard, but it is conventional of a social realism that there is about 3/4 vanity titles at the beginning of the film.
Furthermore, I made a plan to rearrange the order of each frame that I had created to make sure that it edits together as well as possible. I have ensured that the characters' faces are not shown clearly until later on to retain the audience. I also made sure to add in close ups of mise-en-scene to enable me to add credits into the real life objects.
The next step I will take to improve is to redraft my storyboard to include the advice that I was given.
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